tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5015912248402584135.post1584914049465828489..comments2012-12-01T12:34:05.418-08:00Comments on Barclay Davis's EDM310 Class Blog: Blog Assignment #1Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10461212726597382431noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5015912248402584135.post-84482328021380160952012-09-05T16:45:30.176-07:002012-09-05T16:45:30.176-07:00This blog followed the instructions provided to us...This blog followed the instructions provided to us by Dr. Strange. Barclay used two paragraphs to describe herself, and wrote an additional paragraph about Dr. Pausch's lecture. Both headings were done in bold and line breaks were used correctly throughout her blog. She posted her blog before the deadline, and I believe she learned from the video. There are a few grammatical errors that I believe would've been corrected by proofreading. Some sentences seemed to run together and were hard to follow. Other than a few grammatical errors, I enjoyed Barclay's blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com